I've spoken to james about the final designs and he's given me feedback about them. I've changed the symbols one to a square and made it bigger so that the type is more legible. I have changed the typography at the bottom of each poster so that the kerning and leading is more aestheticly pleasing. I have also been experiment ing with the alan fletcher design to try and make the effect of the water more obvious. however i am not sure whether i like it or not as it just looks like a cheap photoshop effect rather that a real image. i also experimented with a brush effect over the top of the type rather than the water which is quite effective but has the same problem as before.

The most recent poster of a cross section of the skin is a little bit crude as some of the elements don't line up and i don't know how to make it better without a lot of time consuming trial and error work.

The poster do seem to be coming together now though which is a relief, the final outcomes aren't of as high a quality as i would have hoped but i have definitely learnt the necessity of practicing time management processes like a diary.